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Deciphering the Prompt

1. Read through the writing prompt. What is the general topic?

2. Read the “Writing Directions.” Underline the words that suggest what kind of writing you are being asked to do. For example, “tell a story,” “explain” or “convince.”

3. Reread the excerpt from Lundstrom. Find and underline the parts, which suggest her opinion.

Persuasive Outline for Juvenile Justice Essay

Introduction

Explain Lundstrom’s argument:_____________________________________________

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Agree or disagree with her analysis and conclusion (thesis): _______________________________________________________________________

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The prompt tells you to: Support your position….

Present Counter Argument One

A reason that the other side would be likely to give: Some people might argue that ____________________________________________________________________

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Topic sentence/ your reason: However, this is wrong/ incorrect/ insignificant etc because __________

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Present Counter Argument Two

A reason that the other side would be likely to give: Some people might argue that ____________________________________________________________________

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Topic sentence/ your reason: However, this is wrong/ incorrect/ insignificant etc because __________

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Commentary

Present a Reason Why Your Argument is Right

Topic sentence explaining why your thesis is right: ______________________________

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Present Your Strongest Reason

Topic sentence explaining why your thesis is right: ______________________________

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Paragraph five: Conclusion

Restate thesis in a new way: ________________________________________________

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A final, memorable line, which calls your audience to take action: ________________________________________________________________________

Reviewing your Outline

1. Check your outline to see if you have done what the prompt asked you to do.
1. Did you Explain Lundstrom’s argument?

2. Did you agree or disagree with her analysis and conclusion?

3. Did you support your position, providing reasons?

4. Did you support your argument, providing examples from Lord of the Flies, other readings, and your own experiences and observations?

2. Read over the rubric and if you imagine that you did nothing more than rewrite what you currently have on your outline, predict a score for each category.
1. Position: _______
2. Organization and coherence: ________
3. Elaboration:________

3. Now read the descriptors to the left of the score you gave yourself and determine what you could do to improve your chances of getting a higher score.
1. What one thing could you do as you turn your outline into an essay in order to get a better score on position?

2. What one thing could you do to get a better score on organization and coherence?

3. What one thing could you do to get a better score on elaboration?